Bula vinaka Maddison, The description that you have used has really helped me understand what you would do and when you go away (being cyclone gita) you would still come back and do what you were destined to do. next time maybe you could put why you have posted this and if it was a class activity or not but apart from that awesome!
Hi my name is Katie. I am a student from Waikowhai school and my class is Hauraki. I like the way you described the way if you were the storm. It reminded me of when i was in a tornado in Canada. If you want to comment on my blog then you can find it at http://wpskatier.blogspot.co.nz/.
Hi Maddison! My name is Mia from Yaldhurst Model school, I really Like this post because you described what you would do and it was easy to understand.
It sounds like the cyclone Gita is a very powerful storm and I would love to look up about it myself! Did you have to search what it was first or was it something that you already knew about?
hi maddison im corbin I like your story about if you were cyclone gita and I love all the descriptive writing come check out my blog here is the link http://ypscorbinj.blogspot.co.nz/
Hi Maddison, This is a unique post I love how you put what you would do if you are a cyclone gita. Maybe you could add a photo and exsplain more about it. Bridget.
Hi my name Abigail from Waikowhai Primary. I really liked how you used interesting sentences. It reminds me of describing hurricanes and bad weather.Maybe you could do more slides and write about them.If want to comment on my blog go to http://wpsabigaila.blogspot.com/.
Hi Maddison, My name is Katie from Waikowhai Primary School. This is a really cool blog post because you talk about everything that happened and what you did to make it work. It reminds me of when I did that when I was little and I did the same experiment with my brother and dad. If you want to see my blog it is at https://wpskatier.blogspot.com/
My name is Jedi and I am a year seven at YMS. I absolutely love your poem, especially the part that says- I would strip down leaves from trees. It kind of reminds me of the cyclone, because I am from Fiji and Gita had been through there.
Bula vinaka Maddison,
ReplyDeleteThe description that you have used has really helped me understand what you would do and when you go away (being cyclone gita) you would still come back and do what you were destined to do. next time maybe you could put why you have posted this and if it was a class activity or not but apart from that awesome!
Kind Regards
Julia
Yaldhurst Model School
Hi my name is Katie. I am a student from Waikowhai school and my class is Hauraki. I like the way you described the way if you were the storm. It reminded me of when i was in a tornado in Canada. If you want to comment on my blog then you can find it at http://wpskatier.blogspot.co.nz/.
ReplyDeleteHi Maddison! My name is Mia from Yaldhurst Model school, I really Like this post because you described what you would do and it was easy to understand.
ReplyDeleteIt sounds like the cyclone Gita is a very powerful storm and I would love to look up about it myself! Did you have to search what it was first or was it something that you already knew about?
Great work here Madison!
Mia
hi maddison im corbin I like your story about if you were cyclone gita and I love all the descriptive writing come check out my blog here is the link http://ypscorbinj.blogspot.co.nz/
ReplyDeleteHi,
ReplyDeleteWhen I saw the title I thought. "What an interesting title." I also like how you did something unique.
This reminds me of learning the cycle of how rain clouds form.
I wonder what it's like to be a storm.
By Mika
Yaldhurst Model School
Link to blog http://ymsmika.blogspot.co.nz/
Hi Maddison,
ReplyDeleteThis is a unique post I love how you put what you would do if you are a cyclone gita.
Maybe you could add a photo and exsplain more about it.
Bridget.
Hi my name Abigail from Waikowhai Primary. I really liked how you used interesting sentences. It reminds me of describing hurricanes and bad weather.Maybe you could do more slides and write about them.If want to comment on my blog go to http://wpsabigaila.blogspot.com/.
ReplyDeleteHi Maddison,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Katie from Waikowhai Primary School.
This is a really cool blog post because you talk about everything that happened and what you did to make it work.
It reminds me of when I did that when I was little and I did the same experiment with my brother and dad.
If you want to see my blog it is at https://wpskatier.blogspot.com/
Bonjour Maddison,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Jedi and I am a year seven at YMS. I absolutely love your poem, especially the part that says- I would strip down leaves from trees. It kind of reminds me of the cyclone, because I am from Fiji and Gita had been through there.
Please never stop, you are a great poet!
Jedi ;)